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Five.
She becomes lucid every once in a while, snaps out of her deepest enigma--from that dreamless sleep that she has been having from the longest time since she saw that white
light.

Four.
She tries to focus. Trying to recall where she is, what date it was and who she is.

Three.
She inhales deeply; it has been a long time since she has done that. She tries to sit up.

Two.
She hears noises--people around crying out for attention, rushing in the dimly lit room that she occupies.

One.
She is losing vision. She tries to speak as a yellow light is beamed onto her eye; it seems to be getting farther and farther. The anxious voices around her becomes muted by the millisecond.

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This actually is a short story for me.
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Mood: Wow! ~ScarletAnneBlack Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very well written.
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:icontalangpula:
Thank you, much appreciated.
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~ScarletAnneBlack May 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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